I dont want to
[whisper]
sweet nothings in your ear
I dont know if you feel how I feel
But I want the
[Truth]
from you
like you want it from me
Just give me the
t-r-u-t-h
I dont care if it hurts
I just want to know you
C*A*R*E*
but you dont
like I do you
I just want to
[Love
You]
I just want to be happy
without hurting you
because I did love you
if only for a
m
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m
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t
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Author notes
I want to tell someone the truth, but I dont want to hurt them in the process thats basically all that I want. I hope this is okay.
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600 points, ended May 23, 2007, 18 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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I think I've been there. It sounds familiar. great job. It flowed wonderfully. It was simple yet beautiful. Some of the most simple poems are the most beautiful. Thanks and good luck.
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