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society which turns us out

The society which turns us out,
The people who only hate.
Everyone is in a group,
a category and a cage,
this can't ever change.
To get by you may turn to
faith, hope, love, or rage,
none of these will get you by
unless you realise it's all a lie.
No one seems to realise,
we are all the same,
If only we'd open our eyes,
Join forces and we're not alone,
Together we'd all be free,
The changes we could make,
By tomorrow,
The world would be ours to take.

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King Kill 33

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  • sinisterkitten
    May 21, 2007

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    this is definently good!!!! actually its awesome!! i like the lines- No one seems to realise,
    we are all the same,
    If only we'd open our eyes,

    Good Luck

  • samcuy
    May 21, 2007

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    i thought this poem was really good
    The society which turns us out,
    The people who only hate.
    Everyone is in a group,
    It's all true. I like it alot
    Good luck in the contest
    sam