Under the green features of nature
The field with approaching moisture
Humming birds,horses with giant strides
Exhilarating waves and tides
It could't be anybetter!
I got lost, caught in blue thought
Imaginery land of the seekers
Bristles of sensation i see
Glistering with life unrife
With elegance and with gifts of nature
More captivating than Solomom's kingdom
Like queen of Sheba,i quivered and shivered
I fumbled,yea,but stumbled into needed attention
Her eyes,beautifully violet!
Surely,my kind of mind to find
Baby,on virge of mumbling 'Hi'
She rumbled nad disappeared into the crowd
Could it be you?
Author notes
imagination of beauty in vague
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I don't know, could it be me? Very nicely written. I loved it. Thank you and good luck.
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