High School
Every one asks who you wan to be when you get out of high school
Well why can’t I just be me?
I have dark brown hair and green eyes a baby on the
And a boyfriend I love even though he irritates me sometimes
I check my horoscope twice a day just see what kind of luck I will have today
Silly I know but I can’t help it, it’s like checking the weather for rain or snow even though you already know.
So ask me again who do I want to be? well my answer is short and simple
I want to be the girl with green eyes and dark brown hair with a baby on the way and
A boyfriend I love even though he annoys me some times
My answer is what it should be I think, I just want to be …me
A contest entry
- The Sky's the Limit by Dead Fishies.
600 points, ended May 23, 2007, 18 entries
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Comments
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ha ha great answer
ive got brown hair and green eyes to
but i am graying
good for you
be real about life
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Good! You should be you. I wish I could say the same thing about me. Truth is, I don't want to be me. Great poem. I loved how it flowed. thanks and good luck.
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Interesting, it was articulate - i am not sure if you could have done more with the language and I am not keen on the layout.
Honest though, heartfelt and well expressed emotions.
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