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Lucid Thoughts

The corridor of thoughts whisper lucidity to my mind.
Silent moments of tranquil dreams drift slowly out to shore.
Embracing peace as mother to child holding for a moment or two.
Releasing enough love to fill the heart.
Gentle breezes toss my hair, feeling the breath of nature's kiss.
Brushing the cheek and warming the soul taking away the stresses of life.
The tender lulliby of birds in song flood the air with peaceful motions
Of forgotten memories of yesterday's sorrows.
God's creation unmatched by the human hand.
Masterpiece painted on blank canvas.
Perfection transformed and brought to life.
The splendor of unblemished peace molds perfect will
To breathe and greet the beauty that beholds the senses.

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  • EmeraldDreams
    May 25, 2007

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    beautiful and graceful flow throughout this piece. the imagery is lovely. such a calm and relaxing poem to read! thanks for the entry and good luck.


  • Dead Fishies
    May 23, 2007
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    Wow...that was wonderful. I felt like I was there. That place is my safe haven. Great job.