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clever lines(deceit)

He can't,he wouldn't,he won't
I made you feel the opposite but he don't
He's got castles,i know
But within aint snow

His big head's just a vacuum
Mines's small but normal,it's even cum......
I'm slim,it's clear,but elegant
But he's just fat like the elephant

Believe me,my heart loves you
His lips does,his heart don't,he's a liar!
He's just brown and boring,but I'm blue
I'm meant to take you higher

My angel,with him you'll have pimples
I'm simple and'd make you dimples
He's really red and rough
But I'm meant to make you laugh!

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love aint in words but action

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  • SecretMe15
    May 18, 2007
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    I don't know. Not too much of my style of music. I can tell it was meant to be humorous though.