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Do me one favor?

I hear the truth fall from your lips,
I see the love in you eyes.

I know you will always be here,
Everything we worked so hard to build,
Everything we've struggled to keep intact,
Is drawing nearer.

I want us to be together, forever,
I know my heart will always remain true.

My heart has been broken only once before,
it's laying there,
A million broken pieces on the floor.

Slowly but surely,
Each piece is moving closer together.

But can you do me one favor?
I would do anything for you.
Tell me you love me?

Tell me we have eternity?

I’d move for you,
I’d marry you,
I's have babies for you,
I would give my life for you.

Please tell me what you think

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  • ley527
    January 4, 2008

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    i love this. Its powerful, and i could actually feel the emotion as i read it, which takes a lot with me in happy poetry