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Afraid to open it.......

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I know you are frequently there,
right behind that futuristic door.
Nothing secretive,
just showing me so much beauty.
The ability of filling my heart,
tolerate my mistakes
So afraid of exploration,
to open it,
not even wary.  
Because if I do
your radius might be gone,
dispense it,
forever.
I am not courageous as well
Losing you would leave me broken
So for now I just keep it closed

Author notes

I know you are frequently there,
right behind that futuristic door.

I chose these 10 words:

frequently
secretive
tolerate
wary
courageous
dispense
radius
virtual
exploration
futuristic

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If I open the door you might be gone...forever...

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  • Danna Hobart
    February 9, 2008
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    Thanks for entering.


  • Tangled Angle
    May 25, 2007

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    This was sweet and nice.
    Good luck in the contest that you entered.


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    May 22, 2007

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    Very beautiful my sweet friend you did a wonderful job...you matched the picture very well and I thank you so much for sharing it with me and entering the contest

  • phoenixonfire
    May 20, 2007

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    LOVED IT TO CORE!!!

    This is absolutely beautiful! I looooved it! Si heart touching and warming that it brought a tear in my eye...I mean no kidding I usually like deep poems but this was so deep in simplicity that I am so touched!! What a lovely poem indeed wolfy! I completely love it! Esp the mention of the word forever and link of the doors...I absolutely love it gal!!

    Thanks for sharing !!

    Good luck in the contest!

    hugs n kisses
    preets


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    May 18, 2007

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    Wow, this is thought provoking! Reading your comment, I usually run INTO doors..and walls for that matter! I am a clutz, but anyway, This is a very intriguing write. Very well done. Good luck in the contest.

    Jeannie


    • Wolf Mistress silver member
      May 19, 2007
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      LMAO

      Hahahahahaha, well I guess that's something I do usually too I am so clumzy as can be...and distracted a lot too...to busy in the head we poets are

      Thank you for your comment beautiful lady, it made me laugh
      XXJeannette

  • dillpickle62
    May 18, 2007

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    um...interesting concept

    Leaving the door closed. Nice little pc. here. Leaving the door closed has me thinking. Um...I always sling it wide open it seems. I don't give anybody time to run. hahaha...

    • Wolf Mistress silver member
      May 18, 2007
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      Hahahaha it's good to wake up with a good comment

      Well...I mostly run through the doors not even being open yet

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