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Torn

Torn between two worlds
Up to heaven, I am beckoned
To the sea I am the whore.

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  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    May 18, 2007

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    This is a deep but most captivating and thought provoking read. Certainly defines the difference in the way all of us are viewed.
    Thanks so much for entering.
    Gaylene