From the sea,
Spiraling forth,
as if spit from the depths
of Neptunes wrath.
aspiring upwards
till at the top
there is no more.
Author notes
okey dokey. I love the picture, and, no, i am not sucking up.
I wrote this poem, and I thought, at first, that it would be a nice poem desciribing the picture. I don't really know what it is now. Perhaps its my feelings of, "If I aspire to do things, and achieve them, then there will be nothing left to dream of."
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I found this really uplifting, but with such a sad ending. An excellent write and thanks so much for sharing.
Gaylene
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