(Cinquain)
Pathways
spiraling up
from the abyss of life
grasping towards heaven's infinite
freedom.
©2007
A contest entry
- Pic Inspired by AliceinPoetryLand.
525 points, ended May 18, 2007, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
A critical comment is invited.
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Ooo I do like this form and your lovely words.
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Thank you! I find it a very pleasing form and easy on the eyes.
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Fantastic! What a beautiful depiction of hope. A wonderful cinquain. The best of luck to you in the contest.
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Thank you. I am glad the message was conveyed in the space provided.
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Wow what a beautiful Cinquain! You have penned so very much in these few lines. A most captivating write indeed. Thanks so much for entering.
Gaylene
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