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Defeated



I've always said that I would make it through
But I never counted on someone like you

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I don't even know what the heck I'm talking about.

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  • Miss Chievous
    June 10, 2007
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    Awesome!

    And Your Point is.....


  • madgirlslovesong
    June 7, 2007

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    i think i know what you are talking about. it sounds like someone who always planned to be independently strong and to not need a man but didn't realize how strong true love feels? or is that just way too sappy... lol.


  • Calvin-Hobbes
    May 27, 2007
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    Sweet

    you gave me so many applause, I have to do some on you!


  • Little Miss Mozart
    May 21, 2007

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    I hear ya! Are you talking about a guy that could be a much better person if he would just shut up and listen to you but there is some reason why he can't, so he disappoints you fearfully and you worry about him secretly and on the exterior you hide your grief that you feel for this boy who is letting himself being eaten away? Yeah... I understand your pain.
    If I guessed it, then he's so not worth your time. I really mean it.
    Katie


  • Miss Splenda
    May 18, 2007
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    I know what you're talking about!

    awesome.


  • Crepuscule
    May 18, 2007
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    I really like it.

    Mind if I use it for my motto, on my page?

  • x x
    May 18, 2007
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    you don't know what you're talking about, but you capture it perfectly... well written.

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