Time to stop comes
A day late
We've wander through lands.
On hurried fate.
Looking upon nearby people with.
Crystallized hate.
Boils through out joined karma.
We plan to rerun the world.
You set the date.
Our dinh.
We listen to you knowing with your words there are no sin.
You taught us the meaning of kin.
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired Dark Poerty by ennovy.
550 points, ended May 20, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Great!!!!!!!!
I applaude you on this one , shows your range in poetry !
Love it Dusty!
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~Lisa~
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yea this is my kinda thing.im gettin into haiku now. peace
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I love it. keep up the great work...so many great lines in it, that i won't even bother singling one out. You've amazed me once again.
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Very Intresting Write
You done a beautiful job of creating this piece, I enjoyed the vivid concept....Thanks for entering my contest.....novy
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