On top of the world,
surging though the cleansing charge.
You bask the feeling of accomplishment,
no thoughts about a drop.
Disappointments knock some around,
though positiveness pulls you through.
Moments of shame are on vacation,
here you taste only delightful mist.
Author notes
By RIP Whoever. 12.
PICTURE INSPIRATION
UNDER 10 LINE POETRY
when one (i) thinks of a sqrew, it twists up, and then down. and that in itself (put to normal life) is almost the saddest thing you can think about. a good thing happens, and then for SURE something bad.
But since when does bad have to out weigh the good? it doesn't HAVE too!...... *says an unexperienced 12 year old* .... amen?
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A most captivating write and most profound. Thanks so much for your lovely entry.
Gaylene
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THANKS
thanks grandma~ xoxoxoxox
hey... what exactly does "profound" mean? i've heard that word around... but never really caught what it meant.
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