Escaping from fetters
of bridled resentment,
flaming flight on 'hooves' of release
to never again aquiesce.
With wings of deliverance
in breezes of liberation,
vast coasts of oceans swell
to crash against your shores.
Bouyant heart races
in animated grace,
with strength of exalted spirit
to conquer all odds.
Creation now, your oceanic abyss
with heartfelt intensity soul palpitates,
in no longer a wasteland
finding tranquility's beach.
A contest entry
- Buffet Of Options by JeannieD Hunter.
600 points, ended May 22, 2007, 24 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Lovely! Describes this picture to a "t". It is also a great allegory.
Yes, tranquility and joy for a horse would be to run unbridled.
Congratulations on your silver trophy! You deserved it with this write!
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Congrats on the Silver. It was very well deserved.
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Excellent
What a wonderful interpretation of the picture. So very well done. Good luck in the contest.
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Just wonderful take on this picture! I am so pleased you chose this one. You have written a beautiful poem to accompany it. Well done. Thank you for this entry and good luck.
Jeannie
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Inspirational and lovely! Broad, sweeping imagery and lifting message. Very nice
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I love in the first stanza where the imagery relates to horse terminology. Kept me intrigued to want to read more. Although it switched from the second stanza onwards, I still enjoyed reading it. You certainly brought the image to life. Well done!!
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