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nowhere

 

I have encased myself

into an illusion of mindless thought.

 

As I battle life's rising stairs of darkness...

 

The waves of failure

silently drown

my climb,

my soul's freedom

is trapped within

a space of nowhere.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Tercil gold member
    May 20, 2007

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    Great verse.

    A space of nowhere, making what I write complicated, the uncomplicated way you've composed this is as much my learning curve. Nicely Done


  • Frozentearz
    May 19, 2007

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    Congratulations on your awarad I think we all have as you wrote "I have encased myself
    into an illusion of mindless thought."
    And found ourselves drowing within them,
    Great work and once again congratulations to you
    Love and Light
    Frozentearz


  • ellipsist
    May 19, 2007
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    beautifully and deeply dark...

    well deserving of the silver... this is a wonderful composition...

    =]


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    May 18, 2007
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    Excellent! I love this. Amazing write. Thank you for this wonderful entry.
    Gaylene