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Mommy! Daddy! Where are you?

Daddy!
Why is your eyes swollen?
Dont yell at me.
I'm just hungry.
Where are we going,daddy?

Daddy!
Why is mommy lying inside the box?
She havent spoke a word since we got here.
Why is everybody crying?
Why is everyone dress in black?

Stop! Wait!
Daddy!
Where are they taking mommy?
Why do you close the box?
She's still inside there.

Daddy!
Why are they putting mommy inside that hole?
What is the priest talking about?
I cant understand.
Can we go home with mommy,and eat at Taco bell's?
I'm hungry.

Daddy!
It's already 8.30.
Where's mommy?
She's suppose to read to me a bedtime story.
Oh daddy!
Stop crying.
Why are you crying?
What are doing with that pointy thing?
Mrs.Fey said dont play with sharp things.
Daddy! Wake up!
Why is there red water everywhere?
It doesnt taste like ribena.

Wait!
Where are you taking my daddy?
Mommy! Daddy!
Where are you?
I'm sorry if i did something wrong.
Please come back.
I'll promise to be a good girl.

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  • DannyBaby
    May 23, 2007
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    this is really sad.
    it shows you how naive children can be and how sad it really is


  • fierra
    May 18, 2007
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    I just feel very bored.So i wrote this..It's not a poem..ahaha!well,i hope it make sense,and if you read it,you could understand what is going on..do give comments..dont afraid to be harsh.