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I Need Your Kind Of Love

It's funny how you mirror back to me
All the sane and crazy things you see
You've seen me in all shades of light
You get all of my current aspects right

Apparently you study me with great insight
To my stark amazement and grand delight
You never hesitate to set me straight
I could not ask for a more needed fate

All these things you do for me and more
Makes me know that I'm in loves' corridor
To a love this great I must totally relate
And cling to it for dear lifes' sake

For it's like fresh air, and running streams
Preventing me from coming apart at the seams
You make all of my days cascade with cheer
I'm overwhelmed with glee that you're here

Patricia Price

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  • jcat gold member
    October 25, 2007

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    nothing better than falling in love and staying there! Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest.


  • Paulies Cracker
    October 15, 2007
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    thank you so much. this is wonderful.... have to edit my contest because stupid me put the rules and everything in the wrong place, but if you would please re-read my contest in a few minutes and re-enter that would be amazing....!! please and thank you!


  • rawrbby
    June 4, 2007

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    PLEASE REMEMBER I'M USING THESE IN A BOOK...SO IF YOU CAN PLEASE ADD YOUR NAME TO THE BOTTOM OTHERWISE I'LL JUST USE YOUR AP NAME.

  • rawrbby
    June 4, 2007
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    Amazing rhyming, amazing feelings. great job. thank you for entering


  • bleed-it-out
    June 1, 2007

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    sweet

    glad to read something positive about love...this was oh so sweet and also how i feel about my fiance great job!!good luck and thank you!!!!


  • second-born
    May 25, 2007

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    wow...your poem definitely makes me fall in love...again and again...i love your poem from the start til the finish...goodluck!


    • 2lullabyhaven
      May 25, 2007
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      Thanks

      I would love to win, but also I like to be inspired to just write something too. Thanks again


  • aliceramone
    May 18, 2007

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    so loving and positive with a grand flow and rhyme...your so positive and filled with love...good luck in the contest you entered


  • Losing Hope
    May 18, 2007

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    I like this
    It's a little different from the others
    And you have really good word use
    Good job
    Good luck



    <3Flo


  • Bas
    May 18, 2007

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    as we look in the mirror we see who we are are who we want to be , do we like who we are or think of wanting to be someone else and then we realize that we have someone behind us wondering the same thing , a better part of our lives who we live for and wake up for in the morning , someone who gives us a breath of fresh air and sunshine and light in our lives and we think of how special they are to us , nice write and good luck in the contest

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