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Sin's Wanton Desires

Well, the short answer is;  "I gave my body over to the ravishes of sin's delight, and sin threw at me it's best"

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  • aliceramone
    May 18, 2007
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    good last line for this write...good luck in the contest you entered


    • 2lullabyhaven
      May 20, 2007
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      Thanks aliceramone

      I wanted to think of a great ending, but this is all I came up with. Thanks for your response.