She wears a smile from ear to ear
as she tries to hide the tears in her eyes
she's a lost little girl
so broken up from all the lies
She wears long sleeves and make-up to hide
her mistakes from the past
but the scars still show
on her pale skin
she's so in love with the guy
who never gave her a second glance
just looked at her and walked away
but yet she holds on thinking that
maybe if she tries hard enough
that he'll actually be interested
She's breaking up
Breaking down
and slowly being ripped
apart by the people
she trusted the most
people she thought actually cared
are turning their back
her heart once whole
lies in the floor bruised and beaten
she's lost in thoughts
that the world would be a better
place if only she could leave
she's gotten to a point
where she can't lie much anymore
she's gotten to the point
where she can't hide much anymore
She's gotten to the point
where she's standing on the
thin line between life and death
it seems like everyone is trying
to push her to the end
she's slowly fading now
and nobody knows it but her
Please tell me what you think
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Very Nice
I really loved how well you penned this poem and I know I say that all the time but tis true. I really love the raw depth and e-motion built into this very fine poem. kepe up the very good work and keep on penning away
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Excellent write
" WOW " another beautiful written piece.
Yes it is so verry Deep. And expresses some very deeply concerned feelings.
Sometimes it seems so desperate yet by reading between the lines you can feel the hope and desire that lies deep in side a soul that is reaching out
reaching out for a little sunshine to brighten a worried soul.
So hang in there there is a Rainbow, and a BRASS ring to catch and hang onto.
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