songbird
melodic chimes
minuscule troubadour
a symphony composed by God
minstrel
Author notes
I think this is my best cinquain ever. It was written under stress but I was thinking of peaceful things
Cinquain
Cinquain is a short, usually unrhymed poem consisting of twenty-two syllables distributed
as 2, 4, 6, 8, 2, in five lines. It was developed by the Imagist poet, Adelaide Crapsey.
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A contest entry
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I think it may be your best as well
lol thanks for enteringlol
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This was such a very good write..short but it says so much! Thank you very much for your entry here
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very nice write. thanks for your entry.
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One of my favorite things is to find a quiet place, often early in the morning, and just enjoy the birdsong. This is a lovely form, reminding me of the rictameter. You can chain them, can't you? Thanks so much for entering my contest!
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Thanks for your kind comments and yes you can chain them. I have done a few cinquain chains. I love this form my friend. God bless you, Mark
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A beautiful picture of a brown bird. A beautiful cinquain.
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a beautiful pic and a beautiful write.
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I think I get it,and its good
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Well, you indeed penned a lovely cinquain. I've written a couple myself
They seem to spark my muse keep up the good work, this was my pleasure to read this evening, beautiful imagery ~Tia
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I absolutely adore the picture ... and what you say within this piece really is true. I want to eat the line "miniscule troubadour" ... it's so yummy!
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Beautiful
Mark,
This is a beautiful Cinquain, I love nature poems but your added reference giving God credit and praise only make this poem more special. To God be the glory. This is a work you can be proud of.
Dennis
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I wish I knew enough about cinquains to give a really good in depth comment but unfortunately I don't, suffice to say then that I enjoyed your poem. Val
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A beautiful write and presentation. Nearly perfect form. Lovely imagery and flow. Lovely depth of feeling. Very good word choice. Nice alliteration. My only observation is that you should check your syllable count in line 2. It's 5 syllables, it should be 4 syllables. Other than that, this is an exceptional cinquain. Well done.
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Wonderful and I learned a new word! This is just beautiful! You are good with the cinquain form! Keep it up! Love reading them!
Frogz~
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This was extremly beautifiul in such few words,
a very nice cinquain
Blessings to you
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Mark ~
I am very happy to see a Man who can create such
Art with a stroke of his Quill ~
This is Lovely indeed Mark ~
SMILE!!
Bear ~
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I love the presentation on this page - the colors, the background, the picture, the poem. All fit together so lovely. A lovely cinquain as well.
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I hardly ever write the way i'm actually feeling it seems. My muse has a mind of it's own and yea, this is a very good Cinquain.
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This is a wonderful cinquain, I think that you can be very happy with this one. It has such lovely words and phrase choices, it makes me smile.
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Very peaceful cinquaine Mark, I liked very much..I know the thoughts behind it also..I wish I was so calm as you are that is something I need to work on ..lol..wonfderful job dear one
AJ
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This is awesome! I think it is too!!! great write sweetie!
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwww yes daddy this is great write ...i love you daddy
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