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Miss Lettie's Blues

It was the Mississippi Delta, on the Louisiana side,
edge-of-a-cotton-field, hole-in-the-wall blues hall it was,
where stale air moaned as Miss Lettie’s blues-lovin’ butt
belted out a woeful, ‘I Want a Little Sugar in My Bowl.’

I want a little sugar in my bowl
I want a little sweetness down in my soul
I could stand some lovin' Oh so bad
I feel so funny and I feel so sad

Miss Lettie liked to wear her clothes loose when dancin’
and singin’ way down there where the blues began,  
home of a juke joint blues jam band, a place called
Junior Dupree’s Grocery, Pool Hall and House of Blues.

I want a little steam on my clothes
Maybe I can fix things up so they'll go
Whatsa matter Daddy come on, save my soul
I need some sugar in my bowl I ain't foolin'
I want some sugar in my bowl

Her thighs kissed each other as she danced on stage, sparks flew
on that hot delta afternoon, her smile wide as Willie Ray blew
his golden, mellow saxophone, I suspect she even smiled when
she slept at night, way down where the river meets the road.

You been acting different I've been told,
Soothe me, I want some sugar in my bowl
I want some steam on my clothes
Maybe I can fix things up so they'll go

Her skin was the color of coffee with two spoons of cream,
her hair was curly and black, her green eyes a soft jade
with light behind them that shone like heaven when she sang,
that sweet black angel loved to shimmy and spread her wings.

Whatsa matter Daddy
Come on save my soul
I want some sugar in my bowl
I ain't foolin', I want some
- yeah - in my bowl.

Willie Ray’s playin’ brought out the best in Miss Lettie, some said
musta’ been a preacher ‘cause he played hell outta that sax.
The music on that stage and the belly-rubbin’ on the floor was
fine shimmy-shakin’, git-down-to-the-blues, y’all, medicine.

~~ . ~~

Author notes

A wonderful singer named Nina Simone sang 'I Want A Little Sugar in My Bowl', and she was wonderful. She died earlier this year, and will be sorely missed.
Written July 29th, 2003

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  • MuddyKing
    October 24, 2008
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    I knew I had heard that before, but more than that I love the dialect...funny thing I paint when someone dear to me passes...John Lee Hooker for example, I can hear the you, you, you in my pool room often.
    This piece is as bluesy as two cats fightin' over a rib bone in a alley down on Beale...love it
    peace and hugs
    Muddy


  • catz Moderators member
    October 6, 2008

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    I love reading about real people and you've done a wonderful job with this piece. It reads so naturally, as if you're telling us of a treasured friendship.

    Excellent job and I wish you the best in the contest


    Dee

  • alistairt
    July 31, 2003
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    wonderful, so original. i really loved it a lot,