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Sex (senryu)

heated blood rushing
liquid fire through blazing hearts
sultry skin erupts

Patricia Gibson-Little

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Written July 13th, 2003

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  • phatalvision silver member
    September 15, 2003
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    Boy, I don't know....five minutes seems like a long time to me!
    You've started quite a fire here with just a little kindling.


  • Marcellus
    August 20, 2003
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    I love it! Great images. Need to string them all together for one hot evening.
    Marcellus

  • Badness
    July 29, 2003
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    another good write