Flapping my thin wings,
Gotta take the first step,
To being okay,
Told my heart that it'd be fine.
Stop asking me,
If I'm going to be alright,
Because I'm over it.
Over life being so complicated,
When it could be so free,
Over friends being so unrealiable,
When they could learn to be there,
Over my broken heart,
Told you I mend fast.
Don't worry about me,
Stop fretting over my feelings,
Not as fragile as I may seem,
Lot tougher than you give me credit for.
But like I said,
I'm so over it,
Over the sun shining,
Through the cloudiest day,
Over the rain pouring,
Making me miss the rainbow,
Over the ache,
Your name used to give me.
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I think the repetition of "okay" in the beginning is a little much, but that's just my opinion.
The ending was truly great though - you created such an emotional atmosphere, and the finalizing line(s) truly make the feeling pop.
I think stanza breaks might help to allow the poem more fluidity and clarity.
Good piece. -
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Thanks, I was re-reading it and I see what you mean. So, I fixed it.
Thanks again.
peace♥dragonfly---
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