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Hypnotic H2O

It’s a little something called science, chemistry to be exact.  The chemistry of the third planet from the sun: Earth, the elements, water.  It makes up most of our body, most of the planet, and we need it to survive.  What is water?  How does it relate to chemistry?  Hydrogen and Oxygen: two gaseous elements.  They form a bond as strong as a parent’s love for its child.  The new molecules are known in chemistry as H2O molecules, but to us, it’s simply water.  Now then, back to Earth’s science.  The blazing ball of fire in the periwinkle sky, called the sun, evaporates the water, which as a vapor rises to dance in that periwinkle sky.  White bundles of fluff called clouds form as the dance nears its finale.  Finally, the moment I’ve been waiting for.  Plip, plip, plip.  The water has condensed and is precipitating back to the soil from whence it began its journey, only to be stopped by the shelter I call home.  Rain.  I love rain.  As the hypnosis takes effect, I rest my head on my pillow and sleep.  Hope you had a wonderful journey H2O, thanks for visiting.  Good night.

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I randomly wrote this in my English class one day. I really like it.

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  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    May 30, 2007

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    Welcome to Allpoetry!

    I like this
    But you should space it out a little and it would read a lot better to those of us who don't necessarily adore science class

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  • Alasar Minoko
    May 23, 2007
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    Lol simple but effective