Come to me with your questions
I have no answers to give
And do not plead with me
I’ve already seen your case
You are all the same
Coming back when not needed
Leaving when needed the most
A contest entry
- \rain on me/ [[ .make.tears .fall.from.my.eyes ]] by autumns rising.
1000 points, ended May 18, 2007, 10 entries
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Comments
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pretty good.... the fact that its short cuts some of the power out of it. u should have written more
good luck

