She stands in a feild,
Blowing singles bubbles,
Bubbles of lands and worlds,
Where everyone is perfect.
Look theres a horse,
And a castle,
No broken legs,
And no wars going on,
But,
It's only a Fairy-Tale.
A contest entry
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525 points, ended May 21, 2007, 4 entries
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Comments
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Nicely penned. I like your reference to the fact that this seems to be a world we are all looking for. Your second stanza is my favourite, espeacially your last line. Thanks for your lovely entry.
Gaylene
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