how pretty is the universe
how innocent are a childs eyes
what beauty more than that of flowers
what peace more than in pigeons wings
a dove's smootheness
planets mystery
mountains strength
the glooms in the sky
stars up high
what beauty more than this
oh what a pretty mix
of all the universes's elements
just a tiny bit of GOD creation
miracles,miracles all over
just enjoy life with no hesitation
A contest entry
- Colorful Image Contest by FaintWhispers.
450 points, ended May 30, 2007, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I think you did a fantastic job writing this ~ I love the way you used the color of the words to work with the poem ~ you might want to try a different color cause it does make it a bit hard to read. The poem was very good! Good luck in the contest!
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Beautiful write
It made me feel peaceful and calm. Love the expression of your words. AP Mom
"what beauty more than this" You my Sweet Rose.
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