Friend to all animals
Father of four
Friendly to most
Never a bore
Not very modest
Nor very humble
When fired up
Does nothing but grumble
Loyal to friends
Faithful to wife
Procrastinates often
Has little strife
Hates being wrong
Loathes incompetence too
Would rather train monkeys
Right from the zoo
Jack of all trades
Master of none
Loves a good challenge
Enjoys having fun
A contest entry
- You by Sofia Nadia.
800 points, ended May 31, 2007, 14 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I loved this and the expression of self, lol, how you would see it anyways. When I describe myself in one, lol, lets put it this way, I'm not that nice >)
But Awesomeness lol
~Katie -
Sounds like a pretty good you which is good
because who else could you be? lol
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i'm a little unsure about this one. i liked your rhyme scheme because it did not seem as forced as some of the others that i have read. and i liked the fact that you were a little more descriptive also, but i still feel that you could've have chosen some stronger imagery to depict yourself to me, a total stranger. overall, pretty good. thanks so much for entering!!
~SofiNadi
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