Headline
I guess I should thank you
For turning me back to my old friend
And don’t even act surprised
To see these cuts on my wrist again
Cause you fail to see that
This pool of blood was caused by you
And this is all a reaction of things
I thought you’d never do.
Cause you seemed so different
And not like the rest of them
But now as I look at the sky
All the stars seem so dim.
And I know what’s happening
I just cant bring myself to say
But if you want you can watch
As my breath slowly fades away.
Cause this is what you wanted
I can see it in your eyes
But no is not the time now to try
And recant yourself from your lies
Cause they became the blade
That I so harshly pressed against my skin
And just to let you know
Your voice will haunt me to the end
Cause you said you didn’t wanna hurt me
Yet you pull this shit
And wait till you see the papers tomorrows.
Headline ….“ Young girl slits her wrists”
A contest entry
- \rain on me/ [[ .make.tears .fall.from.my.eyes ]] by autumns rising.
1000 points, ended May 18, 2007, 10 entries
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Comments
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wow this is so powerful so much pain in it so much suffering i mean really this is an awsome poem keep writing
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Powerful
Ive cut myself so many times over this one guy, who by the way is still killling me. I really enjoyed this though, it is truly marvelous. nice job
"I guess I should thank you
For turning me back to my old friend
And don’t even act surprised
To see these cuts on my wrist again"
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