Its been too long since i have seen your beautiful smile..
Pictures just dont cut it
but the memories i will hold dear forever....
i wish you could see how far ive come dad
i know i could be much better
but its a start in the right direction
These past eight years have been a rollercoaster ride for me
nothing has been going great until now
im finally happy daddy
hes a real sweetheart
i wish you could meet him
you would love him
because i know that i do
he wont hurt me dad
i know he wont....
things have changed so much since you left us
i swear it still kills me
i miss you more each day
it seems like only yesterday you were here with me
making cookies
play fighting
i still remember exactly how you smell
your touch... your hugs and kisses....everything
i miss you daddy
Love your little girl
Please tell me what you think
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wow, this is beautiful. I lost my dad when i was 16, so i can relate to this. I know the hurt losing someone you love causes
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thanxs
thanxs so much for the wonderful comment and yea it is very hard i love my dad when i was 12...it was rough and i have never fully recovered from it ....anyways im glad that you like my poem...
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I love this poem hun so sad and so heart felt...amazing job you are so talented and have been through so much I just wish you believed in yourself more and didn't feel so helpless.....keep writting...and I luv ya much gurrrrllyyy!!!
xox
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heya hun..this was a good poem but really sad..im sorry about your dad its to bad that he had to leave so early
if you ever need to talk im here and keep writting hun your talented
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This is a beautiful poem, it makes me cherish the time I still have with my own father before I no longer can.
I know he would be proud of you.
wondeful poem
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this poem is beautiful, so so sad. im sure ur dad would have been so proud of you, and he would have been delighted that you have written this poem for him. as for your bf, he probably helped you find him hun =)
very well writtin, its touching.xx
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