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Amazed

Never thinking that i would love again
you walked into my life
knocking me down on my ass

the feeling i get when im in your arms is undescribable...
you make me feel safe....Loved
but nothing beats when i wake up in the middle of the night to see you sleeping beside me

and it scares me
i once thought i was in love but it was a crush
what we have is love
i have been hurt and abused
yet you manage to take all of my pain away

when you kiss me
with your so soft lips
you blow me away

we have been through alot together
i have known you for thirteen years
who would ever think we would be together
so in love

so many memories from our past
how did we ever drift apart...
but it doesnt matter
because now you have me
and i am all yours

i will always love you
when you look at me your eyes sparkle
and i know what we have is true
you make me feel like im a kid again
i dont know how you do it
but i love it
i will always be amazed by you...
I love you

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  • XXBrunettexBarbieXX
    May 23, 2007

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    awww it is so great to finally see you happy and with someone that you love and care about very much..you deserve hapiness and he makes you happy that is what love is..keep writting hun ..love reading all your writes

    ~Chrissy~


  • Blueskywonder
    May 18, 2007

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    This is a touching piece of poetry... beautifully expressed. Your longing is passionate. This feels like a sincere piece full of heartfelt emotion. lOVELY PASSIONATE THOUGHTS. WELL DONE... THANKYOU FOR SHARING.