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My Shadow

When no one is here to comfort me
There is always somewhere I can look
Behind, in front, all around me
Wherever my shadow happens to be
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my shadow is the dark side of me
that just sits and keeps me company
he never judges or evaluates me
just sits and keeps me company
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when no one is here to console me
I sit down next to a brook
I then look at grass beside me
Where my shadow presently happens to be
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my shadow is the dark side of me
that just sits and keeps me company
he never judges or evaluates me
just sits and keeps me company
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when nighttime comes I light a lamp
so he may still be with me
my shadow, he relies on me
and I rely on him, my company

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