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she and her prince

looking for her prince
trapped in a fairy tale
in two different worlds
wishing for him to be there
trapped behind the magical mirror
if only they could cross the barrier
he's chased by a worrior
carrying punishment for him
loving a non royal
is quite a sin
only for them
not for her or him
the prince of her dreams
behind the mirror
there eyes meet
they were alone
never felt the presence of the rest
it didn't matter if he was chased or not
if she was trapped
they wanted a final moment
in their hearts their love'd never day
she and her prince
stayed in love ever since

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  • esroddo silver member
    June 11, 2007
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    You painted a beautiful picture here. Your talent is wonderful sweet rose. I am very proud of you and your amazing talent. Your princess is near my dear just open your eyes. Love APMom (Lisa)
    "if she was trapped
    they wanted a final moment
    in their hearts their love'd never day
    she and her prince
    stayed in love ever since "


  • Roaddog Wolf
    June 3, 2007
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    good

    well penned good rhyme and imagery I enjoyed reading this it had good flow thanks for shairing


  • Stickboy
    May 18, 2007

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    wow this is great way to let that ink flow my dear friend...I loved this... I guess we all love a happy ending


  • Ethereal One gold member
    May 17, 2007
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    like a dream

    I love the fantasy of the Prince coming to rescue the pretty female behind the mirror. You have created some wonderful images with your words. I love a happy ending.

    Thank you for entering this contest, and good luck!

    Aurora 2012