Have you ever traveled through the Celestial sky
Made by the Hand of God
Stars and Moon and planets up high
Beyond where man might trod
Well I had the pleasure of such a ride
With my two celestial friends and Mooth,
Mystic and Myrtie were by my side
As through the Galaxy we flew in truth
Away past all the clouds and stars
Up past the Moon so bright
Into the higher Galaxy past Jupiter and Mars
And Venus too, into the dark, dark of night
We stopped to rest for a little while
On the roof of The Palace Of The Moon
We looked in awe of the beauty and smiled
Then on our way again too soon
Mystic and Myrtie made me invisible you see
All the while that I spent with them so free
So all the planets and stars couldn't see me
We could be so happy and sing with glee
Mooth was such a lovable friend
I'm not sure just what animal was he
His beautiful face and horns that bend
He liked to nuzzle up to me
We had to head back down to earth
For the Sun began to yawn
The Moon gave a wink with mirth
We knew before too long it would be dawn
Well we finally reached my home
My friends and I entered through the wall
They didn't want me to enter alone
But they waited outside in the hall
They gently tucked me into my bed
And turned around out the window they flew
Sweet dreams they said as they nodded their heads
We'll do this again in the future anew
Author notes
option#4http://www.ultrafeel.tu/pics art/worldwide/kagaya-johtransmodern-hyper-realism celestial-art-aries.jpg I didn't like all the options, but I liked the galaxy one.I think this is the longest poem I have ever written. My style is rhym
A contest entry
- Buffet Of Options by JeannieD Hunter.
600 points, ended May 22, 2007, 24 entries
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Wow! This is wonderful! So mystical and such imagery. I feel I have traveled with you. You did an amazing job with this picture. I am very impressed. Thanks for this entry and good luck.
Jeannie
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Thank you
Jeannie for stopping by to read my poem and for your kind comments. I love fantasies and using my imagination.
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Awesome journey you take the reader on, magical and fun. It reminds me of a poem I wrote at school when I was 10 though I did have a little help from my mum!
I had a dream that Mickey Mouse took me for a ride
Up into the Universe and out the other side
Lots of Mickeys friends where there bouncing round in space
Donald Duck and Goofy were busy playing chase
We jumped from moon to moon and swung from star to star
Then took off in a spaceship that zoomed and zoomed and zoomed
Then suddenly I woke up and there I was in bed
All my new found friend were only in my head
Sorry I couldn't resist writing that, pretty sad that I remember it too!
Best of luck in the contest.
James.
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