Shredded hearts beat so much faster
Oh baby, you’re so overrated
[mmmhmmm, sugar]
I still haven’t had enough
of this toxic substance, you call love
Smiling innocence
wrong place, wrong time
oh doll, poison me
with your heroin eyes
Sweetheart, your skin’s too sweet for this
glitter trash motel of mannequin seduction
&& synthetic perfection
Plastic morphine && push-up bras
line the midnight street gutters
ohhhh b a b y baby
please tell me this is only lust
an orgasm for the hearts
to beat too
Author notes
Dirty Pretty Option
favorite candy: dove chocolate
A contest entry
- [dysfunction] in an {h o u r g l a s s ...} by LucyLightning.
600 points, ended May 22, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ♥ Rip My Heart Out [&&] Give It To Her ♥ Drop Dead; Gorgeous ♥ by forbidden-colour.
300 points, ended May 28, 2007, 11 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - And Happily-Ever-After Never Cared For Me, Darling by broken-colours.
1000 points, ended June 10, 2007, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ~*~All Your Dirty Pretty Comes Here~*~ by xxRainbowDawnxx.
625 points, ended December 30, 2008, 58 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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AMAZING JOB! loved it!
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tasty and.. well i love the way you incorpated the phrases... as I can remember I think I was in the same contest I think it was OhEmetophibia's contest.! Great write anyway hun.
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Thanks for your entry. I've read this before *points to my comment* And, though it may have been more original than the others in the contest, it isn't exceptionally good (no offense to you). Good luck in my contest.
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What Can I Say Dollface?
Finalist.
Love&&Stuff
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holy fucking shit.
this is rockin my world Razor!!! i read it out loud, especially dirty pretty{so i can get the attitude in} and this is INCREDIBLY awesome!!!!
'Plastic morphine && push-up bras
line the midnight street gutters'
i LOVE that!!!
especially when u add the 'ohhhh b a b y baby' i was like oOoOAOoOoOoOo!!!! lol
i mean, this is so clever! i want to steal it from you! jk im not like that! but i LOVE THIS!
NOTE: WHEN I CURSE THAT SERIOUSLY MEANS THIS PIECE IS LIKE THE BEST I'VE EVER READ!!!!!
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I've seen a lot of dirty pretty poems. This one, however, is very original compared to the rest. Best of luck to you in the contest.
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ooooooooooo i love this. Good luck in the contest, dollface!!
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i often find that much accliamed dirty pretty poems mearly bore me
im looking for vally of the dolls when i read them- and in this one i fianlly found it
Plastic morphine && push-up bras
line the midnight street gutters
i loved this part
and "oh doll poison me with your herion eyes" another master stoke
well done
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This is awesome... I love it.
I love this part...
"Smiling innocence
wrong place, wrong time
oh doll, poison me
with your heroin eyes" -
That is an awsome poem.
I love it.
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