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24/7 seven I'm in trouble for something to the laws on the topic I'm the daily disscusiuon blood pumping and rushing. I got a struggle to survive I be 1-deep but I can do a 9 to 5 long as it be legal I be willing to try trying to get a piece of the pie. I don't take I work for it what else can I do to make it.

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  • movedon
    May 26, 2008

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    you "i"s need to be capitalized. I dont like the paragraph style but you have a good message.

    Mylee


  • Puking Faerie Dust gold member
    September 19, 2007

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    This was very deep and amlost sad. I would just suggest using spell check, because there are a few little errors here.
    Good write, though
    Jeanette*~