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Farewell Tyler

Today you left the school
A proud senior
I will miss you a lot
From now until forever

You were my good friend
You had your ups and downs
That is what made our friendship stronger
And kept it from hitting the ground

I thought i would be okay
Today when you walked away
I feel like crying
I really want you to stay

Come august
You are gone for good
Never to return here
Like i really think you should

I know you did things
my friends never liked
But it isnt there judegement that matters
It is mine

I should have followed my heart
and told you how i feel
But instead i backed into the shadows
I pretended it wasn't real

I am going to miss
Those beautiful eyes
You really mattered to me
But it is going to be fine

I will see you again
And i hope it is soon
Because when i talked to you
I never felt alone

So goodbye to you
My wonderful friend
Farewell tyler
But this isnt our friendships end

Author notes

This is dedicated to my friend tyler. he graduated this year and i am going to miss him. today when i talked to him and told him goodbye i almost started crying. i feel as if i love him but i was too scared to tell him. and now i am never going to get that chance, i really wish i could rewind life to the point when i had that chance to tell him.

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  • whiterabbit.
    May 18, 2007

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    I feel the EXACT same way about one of my friends and I never told him how I feel. I can relate to everything down to the part about his eyes. Every time I think about him going to college I almost start crying. I wish I could tell him. Thats so weird that we are both going through this. This is an amazing poem. It is beautifully written. The flow and structure of it is wonderful. I adore this.
    ~Steph~


  • Valdar Cuebiyari
    May 17, 2007

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    This was really touching Elizabeth...but there is no need for a rewind. The opportunity has not passed. Good luck.


  • Lord Merlynn
    May 17, 2007
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    a bit sad, but a very beautiful and heartfelt write, full of emotion. great job


  • meesh
    May 17, 2007
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    awww.this is such a sweet poem..i hope he gets to read this..


  • Lost In Dreaming
    May 17, 2007
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    Wow i love this--ive done the same thing accept it was with him moving


  • ForbiddensCure
    May 17, 2007

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    I think you did a great job writing about how you feel. Parts of it remind me of songs. I hope you get to "rewind" somehow.


  • James L Williams
    May 17, 2007

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    Lovely Write

    This is a Great Write. This is a great write. I hope that all is well for you my child. I hope that there is a way to save what could be a special relationship. All my best to you hunny. Keep your eyes on the prize and all will be well.

    Dad

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