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Come My Child

As the stars pass through the night.
 Where will I find you tonight.
Will you be fast asleep with out a word.
Or be fighting the night,to the light.

The sea of stars that follow this path.
They have changed very little from the past.
Off on the right foot, what shifts your load?
Sometimes you waver, before you fold.

With only yourself to take the blame.
I am surprised, on how you were told.
From bio-rhythms, to the planets a crossing.
Shaking My head, "That is a  new one on me."

I am always here, glad to be of help.
Doing My best to let you know.
"We are the Boss!" I am often told.
I am always ready to share or carry your load.

Give Me a chance, and try something new.
Let me be there with you the whole day.
I won't boss scream or yell at you , I promise.
"Come My child you are doing well"

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  • Samplette gold member
    June 2, 2007

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    A very nice write. A bit endearing. I thank you for taking the time to entering the contest. A nice job.
    Sam