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Mortal Tears

Black mascara runs from my eyes as i was enchanted; bewitched by a vampire's immortal lies.

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  • 2lullabyhaven
    May 29, 2007

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    Congratts

    On your HM. I know what black running mascara can do
    to a face under the right circumstances. Great write.


  • A Murderous Lament
    May 21, 2007

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    Hmm

    I like this. EXCEPT... it bashes my beautiful vampires... Good luck in the contest.

    A MURDEROUS LAMENT <\33


  • Aquamarine.
    May 19, 2007
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    i like this one


  • bleedingxroses
    May 18, 2007
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    hmmm...this one line is real deep...very creepy and very...enchanting? lol.