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One kiss One life

Give me a kiss for just one night, and you'll be in my head all my life.

A contest entry

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  • Viyanna Rosemarie 2
    May 26, 2007

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    boy, someone has a powerful kiss for this to happen. thank you for sharing this with me and congratulations on the h onorable mention. viyanna rosemarie


  • ChildeOfChaos
    May 21, 2007
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    So true, isn't it? Nice write!


  • A Murderous Lament
    May 21, 2007

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    I love the flow to this line. Sadly one kiss can do that and distroy your life at the same time lol. Good luck in the contest.

    A MURDEROUS LAMENT <\33


  • oh willoughby
    May 20, 2007
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    wow

    very good =)


  • Aquamarine.
    May 19, 2007
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    wow i really like this one

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