Dear Son,
How are you, baby?
Do you know how it melts me to see you happy?
I know you will have bad days,
but I try so much to be with you in every possible way.
I know this is so hard
but nothing could you do or nothing on this earth
can make me lose my deepest love for you
nor change no matter happens.
Nothing can amount to how I care about you-
not a gleam of the stars on the sky
that is so gold with traces of your smile left in its skies,
not the warmth of the flames that dance in the night
or the dark sky with moon that glows bright,
not the sweet smell of roses that blooms in the spring,
Nothing will be able to stop my love for you because my love is constant and will always be true. *runs fingers through hair.
I will love you always and shall I say my love for you is unconditional and won't go away.
My heart has been filled with everlasting love, love that is pure as gold, and that I love you and thats directly coming from the bottom of my heart. *hugs you.
As the sun kisses your beautiful face, I am kissing your cheek.
When you are lonely, think of me
I am probably thinking of you as often as your heart beats.
I will love you when you're sad, happy, mad, and emotional.
You are beautiful.
Your heart and mind are beautiful,
because you're you and I love you the way you are.
What gift can I give you as for tomorrow?
I would like to imagine
an exquisite gold box that's not tangible.
This gift is wrapped with God's protection
and prayer from me to you to bless you.
The box is radient with my heart and energy.
Whenever you feel tired, lonely, or sad,
hold onto this present in your mind
and know that I think of you.
I will be praying constantly for you.
If you forget everything,
then remember this: Mommy will always love you
no matter how things are.
When you feel,
I will always think of you.
I love you!
A contest entry
- Please Help Me by bignikki88.
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it's really sweet. written from a mothers point of view perfectly. i love it! very well written and wonderful emotion. thanks for entering. best of luck
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Awwww I really liked this! The poem, overall, was amazing and very heartfelt. There's a lot of happiness and everything in this one. Verrry beautiful :]
" Nothing can amount to how I care about you"
Theres something about that line that stood out to me. I'm not sure what, but it was just wow. haha
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a beautiful touching poem! well written! Such a lovely poem! there really is nothing more beautiful than the love of a parent. thank you for entering this, take care, Sam (Dreams27) xxx
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wow.. that made me almost cry..
thats so touching..
kidna reminds me of my mom back in the day..
great write!!!
i loved it!!
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Beautiful.
A beautiful tribute of love that is so intense that it can be felt, almost physically all the way through this wonderful loving poem. To be able to express it so vividly is a proof of considerable talent for not only do the words engulf one in your wondeful world but the geelings and emotions all fit perfectly into place too. Beauty is in the eye of the beholder and you have made it possible to view your world of love through your eyes. beautiful work.
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