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a haiku for you

Cold, wet, alone the end of a hard year.

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I have just been trying haiku for fun so please tell me what you think.

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  • J McSANE
    May 25, 2007
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    i like it

    I think its powerfull


  • A Murderous Lament
    May 21, 2007

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    ..

    Hmm it really doesn't make sence to me.. but I don't understand Haiku either so maybe that would help? Good luck in the contest.

    A MURDEROUS LAMENT <\33