I just want to be alone
Oh wait
I am
He's gone
For good
He'll never come back
So why should I bother
Even trying anymore
To live
This life
Without my love
Here by my side
I have no strength
Or appetite
I feel nothing
But the emptiness
He's left behind
In my heart
And soul
I'm so alone
Why should I bother
Trying to live
When death
Would be so much better
Than this
And then
I could see
My love again
Author notes
Option 4
some people think that since their love died or left them that death would be better. this poem is for that reason of suicide. it's not near as good as the one i just read, but... i had to try anyway.
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Comments
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yeah, love can get confusing, but i don't think dieing is worth love..even if you truely love them, don't die because they did, live life to the fullest and when your time comes, it comes. great write
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love sucks, i understand. good write
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This is a very sad poem I know it must be hard on you keep writing and goodluck
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wow
good job thanks for entering.
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