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Your friend just left ur bf's house and made out with him and is dieing what would you do?

You have a cell phone in one hand to call for help and a gun in the other What would you do?

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  • Festering Eye Sore
    July 30
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    I'd knock his teeth out with the gun. No need to pull the trigger. Then throw the phone at him, and tell him to find his own help.


  • oh willoughby
    May 20, 2007
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    gun


  • A Murderous Lament
    May 17, 2007
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    Hmm...

    I would put the title with the other line "Your friend just left ur bf's house and made out with him and is dieing; You have a cell phone in one hand to call for help and a gun in the other What would you do?"

    make it sound better and it's still one line. Great write though.

    A MURDEROUS LAMENT


    Good luck in the contest.