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Forgiveness

Sleep with who you want, but don't expect me to be so forgiving when you regret it.

A contest entry

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  • oh willoughby
    May 20, 2007
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    MUAHA

    this is perfect

    so funny too!


  • A Murderous Lament
    May 17, 2007

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    Hmm.

    I like this one. The anger is great. more like hatred though. I love it Great write. Good luck in the contest.

    A MURDEROUS LAMENT <\33

  • Leaving Today
    May 17, 2007
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    interesting, anger mixed with sadness.