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Unknown

Today I am here; but here will I still be tomorrow?

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life is unknown. when will it end? nobody knows, thus this one line.

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  • A Murderous Lament
    May 17, 2007

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    I understand this one line but it doesn't really speak to me. I like the "Today I am here; but here will I still be tomorrow?" but the "for now" doesn't sound right in the line. Thanks for entering and good luck!

    A MURDEROUS LAMENT <\33