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Life's Colors

Saw life's colors
so long ago
before death befell
the wasteland
and nightmares compressed
reality
Here we look
into pictures
marrying memories
with murmurs,
hushed whispers
of yesterday


Even the dead
tell their tales

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  • Nature Song silver member
    May 17, 2007

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    Even the dead tell their tales...Interesting line. Marrying memories, with hushed whispers.

    Good luck in the contest...~Sie

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  • in-the-twilight
    May 17, 2007

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    This is really great Nate... I like your shorter poems because I get them and understand them better. Rock on! xoxo Meg