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Loaded Gun

Hostage to my occupation
Bill collectors have a gun to my head
Check the mail with hesitation
Blow my brains out while the paper bleeds red

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  • broken-colours
    May 24, 2007

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    Wow! This is incredibly creative. Comparing being shot with receiving bills. Can't help but see it as a tad humorous, though the imagery is raw and amazing. Overall, brilliant.