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The victory of Silence

'Silence, you gloomy dearth,
Enemy of lover`s mirth,
Vile redolent of death,
Why do you tease our breath?'
'Speech',he sighed in mind`s ear
Albeit nought you can hear,
I do speak ,more the part
No words vain,but talks the heart

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  • eyesofanangel524
    May 17, 2007

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    This is a strong write. Intense meanings escape the words you have penned here. Have taken my mind on its own journey. Thank you for entering and best of luck to you in the contest